Thursday 19 November 2015

Ways people speak


I was learning to use word instead of said.
I thought this would be easy but it was very hard because I am very use to using said.
My next step is to try to use less said.



Tuesday 17 November 2015

Collage

 

I was learning about collage.
I thought this would be easy but it's was tricky because I kept making mistakes.
I think co-lodge is very culture to me and fun. 

Swimming



I was learning to glide free style and be safe in the pool..
I thought this would be hard because i'm not a great swimmer.
My next step is to try to be the greatest swimmer than i can be.

Monday 16 November 2015

Term 4 Week 6


Fantastic Friday
On Friday it was fantastic Friday. But it was different it was a assembly. To show all the work we have been doing for the past 5 weeks. I was so excited to see what people have been doing.

First we had the Arts and crafts group they had. Little bag with owls it looked amazing. They were so cute. It was amazing ,it looks so hard but fun as well. I want to try that sometime. The arts and craft they did  looks amazing.

Next we had the cool science group. They had a slideshow and it had all there learning on it. They had videos and photos. First they showed us some cool stuff. First they had a circle shaped peace of paper, in different ways like curled hocked together different ways ,Then they stared cutting and when they finish it split in to different ways.

Then we had the ukulele group. They sound wonderful I loved there song they did, it sound so nice. I wish I could play that myself.

After that The Bollywood dance group came up. And they showed some of there moves it was amazing they even dress up. They put a lot of effete into this dance.  It was very interesting and fun to me I want to try that


Then  Kappa Hakka group came up. They showed us the Hakka and some great moves to the songs. They did amazing awesome job and also my brother was in it he was awesome.
Last but not least the African bead work. Which I'm in we showed our X mas tree with all our fabulous work and our little video at the end.

After all then fun it was morning tea time. And I really think we all did a great amazing work fantastic Friday.

Fractured fariy tale 2




I was learning to write a fractured fairy tale.
I thought this would be easy because sit's your
 own story anything can happen.
My next step is to make my own book about and show others
and help them to do this.

Friday 13 November 2015

Animal scavenger hunt


I was learning about how animals live some fun facts about them.
I thought this would be easy but it was not it was very hard.
My next step is to maybe see a real life animal and  experiments on them learn more about them.

Monday 9 November 2015

Term 4 Week 5

Swimming
On Tuesday I went swimming with my 2 teacher's Mrs. M and Mr. W.

 While we were doing our SDL Mr. W told us dolphins it's time to go swimming.  We raced into the cloak bays and got our swimming togs and lined up. Mr. W gave the instruction to walk down to the pool.

When we got there Mr. W open the gates.  Every one raced into the changing rooms and quickly got changed.   When everyone got out we did a warm up.  First we stared kicking our feet in the pool and the kicks got bigger and bigger and bigger then small again.  We did that for some time.

Then we got into the pool safely we stared from one end and worked our way down. When everyone was in the pool ,we started running around the pool. We  jumped liked kangaroo's and being airplanes then we stopped.

We were learning how to glide our self across the pool. First we try gliding our self to get the idea Second we hock our toes to the bar and try and float lastly we do a gliding race to test if we been listening. After that we got to do a swimming race in the first round I cam 1 first in the last found I did not know what place I came I did not know how may laps we were doing.

After all that we got to have free time. We got to do what we want in the pool if we wanted to we could get out of the pool and change and go back to class. After that free time every one got out of the pool and changed.  To make the time speed up we the girls and boy race in changing and the first team to win goes out to lunch first. Everyone try's to win but the girls keep on winning . After we go back to class tidy up ready for lunch.

Features in Fairy Tales language


I was learning to Features in Fairy Tales language.
I thought it would be hard because I am not good at Features in Fairy Tales language.
My next step is to learn more about and teach others.

Introduction to Narrative writing



I was learning to do a introduction to narrative writing.
I had to watch videos and to do a frame work
I thought it would be hard because I thought i will get confused but it got 
easy when I followed the steps
I chose to share my learning by creating by a goggle doc because it simple and easy to use.


Tuesday 3 November 2015

Determining Credibility



I was learning to Determining Credibility.
We had to look at a slideshow to give us a hint of what we are doing and to try to find wicth of the questions we believe I believe in number 2.
I thought it would be easy at first but it was very hard Because it really got my head thinking.
My next step is to try to find some Determining Credibility on web sties.

Narrative Writing



I was learning to do Narrative writing.
I had to learn the stutterer how to explain it.
I thought it was hard because it was very new to me
I had know Idea hot to it.
I chose to share my learning by creating a goggle doc.
My next step is to to learn more in it to get deeper thought
into it.

Monday 2 November 2015

Term 4 Week 4

Fantastic Friday 

On Friday we had Fantastic Friday again!

I went to rm 14 to carry on with my African bead work. It was fun but , It really pains me when the wire poke me it hurts . But it's the same nothing really change's.I was really hoping we could do like a slideshow to show to the school,but this so amazing  and exciting. 
But we got to use different beads like red and green ,gold and sliver, Just to make it stand out.

But  nothing really change.

It was amazing I always look forward to Fantastic Friday,And I can not believe it is already the 3rd week time goes fast.
 We only have 5 weeks of Fantastic Friday sad very sad ,I love Fantastic Friday it's so much fun . But I am doing great with my African bead work. 

My work is looking amazing, I am almost finish but I still need more beads on it and just make some little twinks but I am doing awesome job. 

 So this is the 4th week almost ending but I am so excited I am almost finish my greatest work ever , I can not wait for this week I am so exited.

Wednesday 28 October 2015

Term 4 week 3

Athletics 

On Friday the seniors did Athletics. I was so excited I could just cry,I love sports my biggest dream is to be in the in the biggest sport event in the year do you know what it is ?(Olympics) I love sports and I am going to tell you all about my greatest day ever.

So on that day we split into our age groups which I was in age 10 and we had 4 things to do .

First I did soft ball throw it was fun but the annoying part is that I was so close to getting into the team so close anyway. 

 Next I did long jump it was amazing so much fun and I did a awesome job at that.

  Then my fav sprints we got into lanes and we raced I got into te top three every time and I got into the team how exciting is that I got into the team great I am in the top three. 

And last but not least high jump which i did great at but yet again I was so close to getting into the team so close but no I did not get in.

I had a great time and can not wait until next year to it again and maybe I can get into more than one team bye.

Name my Charter



I was learning to describe my grandpa I was inspired to know more about my grandpa because I do not talk about him often my next step is to get more info about my grandparents

Author Bias

I was learning how to write my own Author Bias on any topic I found it interesting because I thought it will be hard but it was nit my next step is to go on more advance learning.

Wednesday 21 October 2015

Character Description

Mr Mustache 

Mr Mustache is a miserable man,who is solving crime as-usual.  He fights crime very well ( but he was very old.)  He has white hair like as white as a cloud.  He had a red lip as lava.  His police outfit as blue as the sky Mr Mustache is the most miserable person in the whole town.

Division


I was learning how to do Division to get deeper thought into it I found this amazing because i learnt new things that I thought I would never learn my next step is to show it around teach other people.

Monday 19 October 2015

Opinion our fact


I was learning how to tell what is a opinion our a fact I found this interesting because I thought it would be easy but it was not and my next step it try the next level above


Term 4 Week 2

Fantastic Friday

On Friday all the year 3,year 4,year 5 and year 6 we all got to choose 5 activates and the teacher chooses one. And these are the activates Glee,Bollywood dance, Sewing wool crafts, Vintage games, Cool Science, Traditional Sports, Ukulele and African Bead work.  Norah and I we went to do African bead work it was really interesting and I am going can bead work and to tell you all about African bead work.


When we got into our class room rm 14 we meet Mrs Howard. And she helped us to learn to do African bead work and about Africa .But first we learnt about the country it was amazing to learn about my home country. Did you know that I am from Africa. And then after we got to draw what is going to be our bead work and the theme is Christmas YAY!!

This Fantastic Friday will be the best and I can't wait for this week see you later bye




Tuesday 13 October 2015

Yahtzee




Reflection

 I was learning to play Yahtzee I had to read the instructions play and have all at the same time we had to keep reading it over and over again I thought it was fun because I thought it will be hard because it is a maths game but it is really easy My next step is to have more time with it then less.

T 4 W 1

 My Holiday

For the past 2 weeks my holiday was so boring that what I thought it was but really  had the greatest time of my life.

What Happen with my dad
I went to work with my dad but I was very hot,we went so many places I go to see I went to far places for a week and Monday and Wednesday, and I even got ice blocks,  I had the best time ever with my dad.
What happen with my mum
When I stay with my mum on Tuesday,Thursday and Friday, we got to go to McDonald's I had a great time there, and I got to go shopping,and I got to make my hair, I did all of this fun in just 3 days wow, I had the best time with my mum. 

So my holiday might had been boring,for some people but sometime it's just best to stay home and spend time with your family.

Monday 12 October 2015

Facts Finding in Non-Fiction Texts


 My Reflection 
I was learning to use the 5W finding the main ideas in the articles.  I used this information to write a summaries of the articles.  I thought it was easy and difficult in between to find some of the facts .  It was easy and hard the same in between to write the summary because it was just putting my notes into sentences.  My next step is to practice more at finding the main ideas.

Wednesday 16 September 2015

Recount

March Bang!!!
We were running as hard a we can.  We were jogging,running and walking.  We were all crossing our fingers that it will not rain.  All the year 4's 5's and 6's were running out side school.  We were doing this to see who will be in the inter school cross country team.  Then all of the sudden....


It stared spitting not that hard but we kept on moving and running.  Then it stopped so we went YAY.  Then it stared raining hard out.  Everyone went crazy we lost where we were going.  Then I sign can this get any worse then it just then the wind came ah ah ah .

When the wind came it got even more crazy.  I was running the rain and the wind came running into my face it was painful Mrs M Came.  She told us come on time to go you can do one lap.

We were running quick quick quick.  We were getting tired, but we kept moving and moving.  We were smashing puddles trying to get our self around people that were in our way.

Then...
We got to the road then we cross the road down the ally way threw the gate across the school pass the staff room pass the court and back to the class room.

When we got back to class I met my friends.  Then I found my I found my jumper to dry myself while my friends and I were talking.

So after all that was not best day ever but I had a great time.  Anyway did you have a bad day.




Tuesday 15 September 2015

Kensuke's Kingdom- Michael Morpurgo knowledge of new vocabulary





Kensukes Kingdom Mother and Father interview




Reflection

I was learning to interview someone and to learn how to interveiw
I had to ask her qeustions and add more and more
I thought it was easy at first because I thought interveiwing would be easy but it was not
My next step is to be the parents our what ever B)

Monday 14 September 2015

reflect,rotate and translate


Reflection

I was learning to reflect,rotate and translate
I had to watch a video read and do a worksheet
I thought it was fun because I never done this and I thought it will be hard but it was easy and fun
I chose to share my learning by creating by doing a video
My next step is to learn more advance things about this maths

Wednesday 2 September 2015

Blog Recount

Breakfast 

When I woke up this morning by the sun shining in my eyes.  I did not feel like getting out of bed I felt so warm and toasty.  I was so sleepy and warm  But it was such a beautiful day to wake up.

When I got dress I choose my uniform off my chair that I set up last night.  And when I got dress I felt so warm.

When I packed my lunch I packed a juice box,bread,packet of chips,mandarin that is all I packed.  I just fell proud that I've been packing my lunch since this year.

I had cereal it had oats and that is all I remember I I got some juice on the side and some milk with my cereal.  I had my breakfast at the dinning table,  The sun shinning on the table.  I ate with my dad and my brother.  My dad was reading the news paper and me and my brother were talking.

So My Morning was a great morning and I cannot wait until  school starts...

Geometry 3D shapes





Reflection


I was learning Geometry 3D shapes
I had to Watch a video and watch a slide show to learn this
I thought it was Amazing because I thought I knew this but I learn t something from this
I chose to share my learning by creating google doc
My next step is to try advance learning in Geometry

Tuesday 1 September 2015

fractions of a set




I was learning to do fractions of a set
I had to watch a slideshow try some practice questions and come to a workshop
I thought it was fun because I was interesting that I thought I had know Idea but I had all sorts of Ideas
I chose to share my learning by creating A google drawing
My next step is to try bigger ones and higher numbers


Monday 31 August 2015

Tearn 3 Week 7

Last week we did our art show it was named Paint our world it was a great Topic we got to see other peoples art work and ours  too it was great we did awesome work and they were cute,funny and pretty art works we loved it all.


So first we got to do a art hunt we teamed up I was with Emma.S and shaniqua we were all in groups and we had to go and explore the art show that way we get to see more and more art work it was great fun my favorite one was rm 18 they did amazing art work it was even cute art work they did I just don't remember the name at all well anyway they did amazing art work and I loved it.


So at the end we meet back together and we talked about the art show it was lots art to love we all did a great job we were great so then after we had to go do I just love art so much I fell like I want to be a artiest in my life I in life I want to do painting and all kinds of stuff I just fell inspire to do art well we have to go to cross country  bye. B)

Language Features Writing Lesson 1


Reflection

I was learning to write smiles in a topic Language Features
I had to watch a video try some practice activates and a sorts
I thought it was fun because I was interesting that I thought I had know Idea but I had all sorts
I chose to share my learning by creating A google doc
My next step is to try Metaphors

Tuesday 25 August 2015

Term 3 Week 6

My blog recount 

Last week we did not do SDL learning because we had to get our 
 art done for the art exhibition on Monday and we had to get it done.

So when Mrs G was working on our art we were making a project It was called lets flag it it was fun and interesting for me and my group my group was Deborah Mandy and Nadini we had tones of fun.

 But we did not finish everything we just had one more Task to do and that was make our own flag for our own school Elm Park.

But on the bright side if we can finish our SDL learning this week we can finish our project and I hope I finish so YA!!

Haiku Poem

I was learning make a Haiku poem
I had to read and study all about I learnt so much
I thought it was interesting because I learnt something 
about japan that I will never learn before in this.
I chose to share my learning by creating a little page on the
computer it is simple and fun
I thought it was great because I did this in a fun way
My next step is to write some more of these so I will improve 
and be better

Friday 14 August 2015

100 Word challenge

RAINICORN

One day the zookeeper went on a night shift he was scared Legan says there is a RAINICORN they say he is evil trouble  and he never leaves any desert behind he was scared so scared he did not wanted to be desert but he had to go on the shift it was just him he had his flash light he went walking around and a shadow went waling and another and more he was scared he walked faster ,faster and faster he thought there was just one no more when he turned back he diaper what happened .

Monday 10 August 2015

Explanation Writing


Reflection

I was learning to write a clear explanation for an audience.
I had to write in paragraphs and understand so I can get it write
I thought it was fun because we are doing this often and I am getting better at this
My next step is to have fun and to do this by my self in my own time and to do this in me own writing

Wednesday 5 August 2015

Term 3 week 3

Last week, on Tuesday and Thursday all the seniors had cross country.   I was running I was so tired I felt like falling but instead I kept going I had to do 2 laps you may think it is easy but it is not.




When we had to do I was like no way but I had to I will just do and I will get it done and over with the good thing was I did not had to go in the rain would you like I  that I do not think so But It is sort of refreshing because you can get wet when you are sweating but is not good when It is big  rain you know what I mean right.




But I love cross country you can get fit and you get some time of the laptops IPad It really good we are learning about well being and how o balance our life to use less electronics and less natural I am trying to get more out side instead of inside but you can see It is raining a lot so ahhhh.






So I think this is a good thing to get out side more instead of waiting inside I hope you get out side more and not stay inside too much B).

Tuesday 4 August 2015

Explanation Writing - How to Make a Milkshake


Reflection

I was learning to do Explanation writing
I had to watch a video and to do a brainstorm it was fun
I thought it was fun because I am really getting good at this and I got some help from the teachers that really helped me
I chose to share my learning by creating a doc and a google drawing
My next step is to not have help from the teacher and to not use he template

Monday 3 August 2015

Kensuke's Kingdom - Chapter 2


My Reflection 
I was learning to find the key words to answer the Question
I had to read the 2 chapter and write some notes down so when I go to the activate I will have my notes
I thought it was interesting because I got to learn about sharks and I got to do some effected research
I chose to share my learning by creating a doc and to do a goggle drawing because it was nice to like that
My next step is to do my question and to do more research and to study on some sharks maybe

Thursday 30 July 2015

Kensukes Kingdom chapter 1 Peggy sue



My Reflection 
I leraned that you can do your own argument If you read Like a book magazine our anything 
I think this is good for my learning because I can think my own words 
My next step is to try to do this at my home and any where I go so I can get better and better at it

Explanation Logic order



My Reflection 
I think that I understand this but I need some help just to get a start because when I do understand sometimes I need a push to know what I am doing.
My Next step is to understand and to do this all on my own so that  I am doing SDL learning .


Wednesday 29 July 2015

Quaky cat


Room 29 went on a fled trip we made this it was really fun we use colour pec of paper glue and pens that are black and I learn some new things there i was really sad that we had to leave I want to visit  them again but i had amazing fun.


Tuesday 28 July 2015

Identify the symbols for improper fractions



Reflection

I was learning to Identify the symbols for improper fractions.
I had to watch videos and I had to play some games to have practice.
I thought it was a good thing to learn this because you need to use fraction in life.
I chose to share my learning by creating a video of me playing pacman this is a fraction one I was bad at this at first but I got better and Better I love fraction so much I could scream out loud
My next step is to learn how to to say the forward and backwards word sequences for halves, thirds, quarters, fifths and tenths

My Answer

  • What is an Improper Fraction?  A improper fraction is when the top number is bigger than bottom number.
  • What is a Mixed Fraction?   

  • Is a combination of a hole number and and a fraction
  • How do you change a Mixed Fractions to an Improper Fraction?

  • you multiply the bottom then we add the top with it then you put the new number 
  • How do you change an Improper Fraction to a Mixed Fraction?

  • We can change a improper faction into a mixed fraction by dividing the number on the top with the number on the bottom





Monday 27 July 2015

Term 3 week 2

Last week we just came back to school I was so happy we just got get everything ready for next week we got to organize our week.

So we had to fill out these cards  and take a photo of our self and we wrote where we are at our SDL learning I was thinking I am going to be a level 3 I was hoping hoping I was thinking should I be A level 4 our level 3 but think I should b a level 3 and I should work my way up to level 4


So we just had to getting ready so the next week we are ready when I came to school my friends Deborah and Nadia came running they were like come int the class room come come you have to see this when I came I saw that I was a mentor my mouth was wide open I felt like a new person I was so happy I could just but yet again  I was in the class room .

 So that was a good week for me and this week I think I could just scream now but again I am in the class  room so see yu next week read my next blog post I still have more to do Bye.

Monday 29 June 2015

Multiplication stratigies


My Reflection 

I  am learning to use Multiplication strategies in my maths.
The hard part was to get the times in the right place because 
you have to use alto of  times in this strategies.
My next step is to learn more times tables to do this kind 
of  strategies in my maths.

Monday 22 June 2015

Term 2 Week 10

I am really sad today because It is almost the end of the term and I am going to miss school I love school,so much I can not be sick for once in my life not once I am so upset.

I don't want school and ever but I do need a break no I don't want school and that is done. But I do need to have some sleep I am over thinking this I need a break from school now I am so confused .

But school is the reason I wake up in the morning how am I going to wake up but I can use a alarm clock but it's going to be to noise but long store short I don't want school to end.

Maybe I can learn at home as well so I can be ready for school so Then I can be prepped for school  next term. Hay on the bright side I still have a half day and 7 days to go I will make the best of this term.


Wednesday 17 June 2015

Term 2 Week 9

This week we were doing speeches in our class room. We were doing this so we can choose who is going to be our 2 people that are going to represent us in the school speech finals in Term 3. 

I was very scared. I really wanted to get in the finals and to see who is the winner. I was so nervous about doing my speech but I sucked it up and I said my speech. I had butterflies in my tummy when I was up there.  I was very shy.  When I herd them saying my name I was scared that they were going to give me bad results on my speech.

But I kept believing in myself and kept on trying, even when I think they don't like it I kept on going. When I was up there I was thinking in my head  please like it please like it and I hoped that they were  going to like it.  And guess what they loved it I was so happy when they loved it.  At the end they clapped I was so happy.   
I was so proud of my self and I was happy. I hope I get picked to be representing my classroom.  I am still waiting...

Friday 5 June 2015

Hauora Presentation

 
My Reflection 
I was learning about well being and this is apart of the learning.
The tricky part was when I  had to organize the words in it's write
place because I did the words what they mean and I don't under stand moari well. .
My next step is to learn moari and read the presentation well and not to just read and go I'm Done
 and to just read one by one.

Writing paragraphs


My Reflection

I have been learning to write a paragraph. I now know trick because I did not how to do paragraphs I was very challenge for me.My next step is to write using paragraphs in all my writing.

How the brain works





 My Reflection
I was learning how the brain works.
The easy part was when I can research  because I 
can just momrise it and put it in my own words that BAM! I've got it.
My next step is to get all of this knowledge in my brain.


Fluency

MY Reflection 
I was learning to read fluently in my reading.
The easy part was when to do the pace it help me the most in my fluency because I 
did not know what was pace until I learnt about that really helps me.
The tricky part was when to read out loud because I  normally read my head
and find it really challenge for me to read out loud. 
My next step is to achalley read out loud and not just read to my self.

Tuesday 2 June 2015

Making Conections

 I was learning to make connections with the text, text-text, text-media, text-world and text-self.
Text to self was easy because I had some experience in life.
I got stuck on the media because you have to think about videos, movies and clips.
But I enjoy this learning because I got to learn how to make connections.

Term 2 Week 7

Last week Rm28/29 just started this weekly task .  You know why we are doing because our teachers want us to be able to managing our selfs in stayed of just listening to them.  That is quiet boring for me.  So what we do is they give us a planing sheet then we plan what we are going to do for the rest of the week some of us we don't want the sheet so we just do what we need to do but I feel safe with the sheet and i feel happy with it.  But we have some must do and we have to do workshops from each subject,like maths,reading and writing.  We have a site to go to to get all these kind of links to do our activates.  This really good for my learning because I use to not manage my own self but know Iv'e been push to do best in my learning and to manage my self.  This is the best way to learn in life.

Friday 29 May 2015

I before e rule

This week we learnt about I before E rule.  I found this interesting.  I got a couple wrong because I did not look at them focused on my work so that is why got some wrong.

Thursday 28 May 2015

blog recount

This  week Room 29 went to Te Tuhi.   It was amazing.  We went there because we were doing a matariki work shop about vertical gardens and we had 3 instructors Jerome,Karen and Te Aroha.  
First we had a bottle we had to cut to make room for our plant.  Second we had to to put  some decoration  so it can pretty we these little sticky things that we use to draw on then we stick it on our bottle.  Next we had to go and put some pumice in then we put some soil in next we got to choose our own plant I choose a purple flower.  Then we water them so they can grow. Finally we went to go look at some art I was amazed about the art work and when we knew that our art was going to be displayed  in te tuhi I was so excited that we going to have our own project displayed in te tuhi and  that we have video of us doing it.

Thursday 21 May 2015

Place value and Rounding and compersating




I am learning different strategies addition and subtractions problems.  I learnt rounding and compensating and P.V Partitioning. 
Place value was easy.  I perfer place value because you don't have to ask the question Too much or not enough in rounding and compensating. I got stuck on rounding and compensating because of the Too much or not enough it was really tricky to under stand. I enjoy this learning because I learnt something new.

Term 2 Week 5

Tints and shades 
For the past few weeks we been learning how to do tints and shades.  We got to choose witch color to use  I choose yellow.  In the middle we use our true color in the middle.  Then we add black to to make tints and we went down our page.  A few days latter we did our shade so we add some white to it then we made shades and we went up the page.  Next we let them to dry and that was our tints and shades.  I learnt how to do tints and shades I loved it so much I hope you try.

Wednesday 20 May 2015

My groups script


In my group we had to do a script for our video and this is it we had really fun doing but it was hard work. We had to get the message out and give instructions out and we have bloopers. For our inquiry project for civil defense.

Identify Characters

 
I was learning to identify characters traits and compare characters based on these traits.
I had to find out there Physical,Social and Emotional.
T he easiest trait to find were emotional,Social because there was more info and I got into the story because, I was no into it until I got more info.
The hardest traits the physical  because they don't tell me how they look.

My Speech Brainstorm



Thursday 7 May 2015

Term 2 Week 3

Science experiment
On Tuesday 6 people went to do a science with Miss Courser.  I was one of them it was cool!!.  We use water and corn flour it change into liquid but then is change into solid it was amazing.   I had the best time ever but it was a little bit mess when put in the corn flour in.  Miss Courser was the best teacher that tough me how to do SCIENCE!!. 

Thursday 30 April 2015

Term 2 Week 2

100 word challenge 

On Tuesday room 28/29 did the 100 word challenge.  I wrote story that will bring tears to your eyes have a sneak peak.   I feel really proud I’m going to war I’m going on an exciting adventure.  When I saw my parents they were crying, I was starting to get sad but my friend said don’t cry be proud that your going that war.  
 There you had a sneak peak did that bring tears to your eyes.  The story is about a solider going to war. Image result for tearsImage result for war