I am very happy that i got a award and I love helping.
Friday, 23 May 2014
I was learning how to add detail using my five senses. One thing that work for me was using a brainstorm to organise my writing. One thing that I could do well next time is find more words for the smells. My overall I think I did well.
I was learning to understand the character's impact. I think I did well for the Novel group. I did a good job at finding the changes that Leslie caused. My next step is to put more ideas from the story in my writing. I think I went well. I did need some help. I am proud of my self.