Friday, 30 May 2014

Friday, 23 May 2014

My special place



My Reflection
I was learning how to add detail using my five senses.  One thing that work for me was using a brainstorm to organise my writing.  One thing that I could do well next time is find more words for the smells.  My overall I think I did well.

Understanding a Character's Impact



I was learning to understand the character's impact.  I think I did well for the Novel group.   I did a good job at finding the changes that Leslie caused.  My next step is to put more ideas from the story in my writing.  I think I went well.   I did need some help.  I am proud of my self.